The production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why is global warming considered one of the most severe issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved.

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time to take responsibility for what mankind did to nature.

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by all means of transports,

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cars, heavy-duty trucks, trains, aircraft, ships, creates

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in the air. By the rise in the volume of

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harmful vapours, and decreasing percentage of oxygen in the air have deadly

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on all living beings. Another pivotal aspect is that the high-temperature forces ice to melt which increases the

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in the sea level .

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to overheating of the earth surface. The steps to deal with

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converted from gas engines to fully electric.

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will lessen. Primarily, afforestation will balance the ratio of fresh air in

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with reducing the

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of overheating of the earth surface. To conclude, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the problem of temperature rise in the atmosphere can be addressed, provided that the above-stated measures are taken.

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