The production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why is global warming considered one of the most severe issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved.

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impact of releasing harmful smoke,which resulted in global heating, and it has become
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controversial subject in recent years. In my opinion, it is
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time to take responsibility for what mankind did to nature.
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, climate change is a concerning matter.
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by all means of transports,
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cars, heavy-duty trucks, trains, aircraft, ships, creates
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in the air. By the rise in the volume of
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harmful vapours, and decreasing percentage of oxygen in the air have deadly
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on all living beings. Another pivotal aspect is that the high-temperature forces ice to melt which increases the
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in the sea level .
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an enormous amount
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heat
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to overheating of the earth surface. The steps to deal with
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converted from gas engines to fully electric.
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will lessen. Primarily, afforestation will balance the ratio of fresh air in
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with reducing the
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of overheating of the earth surface. To conclude, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the problem of temperature rise in the atmosphere can be addressed, provided that the above-stated measures are taken.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • greenhouse gases
  • atmospheric heating
  • global warming
  • extreme weather events
  • rising sea levels
  • ecosystem disruption
  • heatwaves
  • droughts
  • species extinction
  • economic implications
  • disaster relief
  • tipping points
  • renewable energy
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon sequestration
  • reforestation
  • afforestation
  • sustainable agriculture
  • methane
  • nitrous oxide
  • international agreements
  • Paris Agreement
  • emissions reduction
  • lifestyle changes
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