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Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

#topic #rubbish #governments #amount
In
this
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 in the quantity of rubbish is one of the most significant issues that society is suffering from.The reason is
also
 Society itself.
This
 might be happening because of several
reasons
 that are mainly created by people and industries. The most important
reasons
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 behind the garbage problem could be
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a lack
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 of awareness about recycling waste.Even Inclination in
rate
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the rate
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 of population leads to
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an increase
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 in usage of goods and services which results in more and more garbage
production
.Technology enhancement leads to digital garbages like old mobiles,laptops,chargers,broken televisions.These all are the types of
reasons
 that are directly proportional to rubbish
production
.
Government
 has
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 capability to control
this
 issue by providing
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different types of recycling systems
such
 as deploying separate dust bins in the streets based on the disposing
materials
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of materials
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.So that municipal corporation workers can process the rubbish for recycling in
more
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 prominent way.
On the other hand
,
Government
 should promote organic goods and products to sell ,which leads
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less
production
 of industrial wastes.Not only
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the government
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,
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individual
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 responsibility to make use of recycling products .Along with
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changes
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government
 should
also
 make some ways to reduce digital waste by keeping exchange offers for old phones and laptops so that
production
 companies can reuse the parts of the old products and sell the items for less price. To recapitulate,there are different
reasons
 that produce
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wastes in
this
 contemporary world.It is the
government
 and respective departments responsibility to make the people understand the garbage issues as well as solutions to maintain our country clean and green.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • sustainability
  • landfill
  • recycle
  • single-use products
  • waste management
  • regulatory measures
  • composting
  • biodegradable
  • environmental impact
  • incentives
  • sustainable practices
  • circular economy
  • zero waste
  • responsibility
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