Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects in elementary school such as reading,writing and math. How far do you agree or disagree?

Computer
skills should be
one
of the main subjects of primary schools based on some parents' ideas. During
this
process
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they learn how to enter the new era. I agreed that having
computer
knowledge is necessary for our
children
to understand more issues in their
future
jobs and households. On the
one
hand,entering
this
new scientific world needs knowing more computers and definitely more
computer
programming.
For example
, automobiles factories, medical development, gaming, house making and most of the initiative facilities need to know computers in the new century.
Moreover
, the
future
is based on artificial intelligence and
one
of its necessities is knowing computers. If
children
learn how to use the
computer
or write a program in their childhood, they can improve it in their adulthood and it might help them to have more confidence and ability during their life.
On the other hand
,
although
, the necessity of learning
computer
is revealed everywhere and every time, push
children
to adults' world is not a right way for their childish due to some opinions. Some people believe that elementary school students should have more free time to play with their peers. They ought not to force to learn more than writing and reading.
For instance
, there are some
children
who do not want to learn anymore. If they have pushed to learn something more, Maby they quit learning.
Hence
, teaching
computer
skills not only hurt these kinds of groups at the moment but
also
will destroy their
future
. In conclusion, there are two groups in approaching
this
issue.
One
of them might be more successful due to learning
computer
skills in their elementary school.the other group Maby resign to be at school anymore and it will be changing to a mental problem in their
future
.
Therefore
, if schools grant the opportunity of choosing
this
lesson to students Maby it gives them the right way to opt.
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