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Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People are always likely to have a good working atmosphere. Some people believe that the prime aim of an employee is to focus on work , rather than maintain relationships with colleagues.I moderately agree with the statement and In
this
 essay ,I will support my opinion with examples. On the one hand , Managers always want workers to concentrate on their job .
Although
 they engaged in talking, diminishing their outcome . Indeed, loose talks create laziness in staff.
For example
 , A recent study conducted by IIM students in India says that labourers waste 10 per cent of working time by chatting .
On the other hand
 , Conversation during the job strengthens the bond between workers.
Moreover
, it boosts up their mutual understanding which
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 tendency between the colleagues.As an example, if a teammate struggle with a sick during work,a strong relationship
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 someone help to overcome that condition.
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