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As more and more people move to cities and as cities expand in size, City life loses its appeal To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

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A large number of the crowd are moving in
cities
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 as well as
cities
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 are getting developed.Due to
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city
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 life is slowly decreasing its appeal.
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 essay completely agrees with the statement. Since more population deals great damage, as well as opportunities, are lessened in the
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. Leaving the countryside and moving to the
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 looks like a great opportunity for a huge amount of
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,
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 the populations of many
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 are expanding day by day. Due to
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, opportunities and chances are getting taken which damages the appeal of any
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.
People
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 are taking over as many jobs,education institutions as they get.
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,a recent study done by a group of journalists shows that fewer
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 for any purpose
lead
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 to fewer and fewer
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 moving to
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since they are already set up to fail.
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, a bigger amount of
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 means more damage to a
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. As the crowd grows,many pollutions are created
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 as noise pollution,air pollutions and so on.
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,creating many kinds of health problems .Other than that many viruses can spread easily throughout the crowds resulting in less interest
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 drains overall health.
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, a
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 named Dhaka was named the most dangerous
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 for a recent virus spreading due to a large crowd. In conclusion,for the number of dangers and the fewer amount of opportunities moving to a
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 is not a good idea for any
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's image or any individual.
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