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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

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The quantity of success is always measured by richness and other multitudes of material things. But in my opinion, the achievement is not just about making money,
furthermore
, it is more about living life with a sense of fulfilment on a deeper level. Most
people
 do not understand the difference between accomplishment and wealth, so their main goal in life is to become richer.
However
, they realize that even if they do manage to get rich, it will never give them a real sense of accomplishment. If
this
 had been true, the only happy
people
 who would have been in society would be rich
people
. Despite
this
, we observe that every segment of society experiences happiness and successful feelings. Another misconception about achievement is to compare advances to a point to be reached.
This
 is why most
people
 think of success as a goal, my opinion is that, so accomplishment should not be an aim but it is an instrument to be happy. So, if you have money and yet you are unhappy, it is doubtful how long you will experience the feeling of achievement.
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