People, who go to live in other countries, should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words
Most of them believe that migrants should obey the
countries
customs and culture
of the place when they choose their new home. I partially agree with this
statement because a person should follow countries
law and order to maintain the security of local people and quality of lifestyle, However
an individual could not force anyone to follow their Add a comma
,However
culture
and traditions because that their
own choice.
Add a missing verb
is their
First
of all, nowadays number
of people choosing the new Change the article
a number
the number
country
as their second
home therefore
as a migrant we should follow their country
rules and regulation without any dought. Each country
has a law to protect its local inhabitants, as a migrant
we should respect the individuals. Add a comma
,migrant
For example
, in middle
east they have strong punishments for breaking rules and their regulations Correct article usage
the middle
therefore
humans can not complain about their punishment. They need to follow the countries
rules despite the punishment is harsh.
Second
of all, different humans they
have kind of their own Correct pronoun usage
apply
tradition
to follow therefore
we can not force them to adopt
to new Correct your spelling
adapt
culture
or tradition
because many Asian countries
have their special tradition
and they will not be able to convert suddenly to new
Add an article
a new
the new
tradition
. For instance
, Muslims they
should eat halal (the way they cut the animal) foods and Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
they should not eat pork. This
menas
if a Muslim person goes to china he will not be able to Correct your spelling
means
adopt
to eat pork. Correct your spelling
adapt
Thus
, nobody can rule to change individuals tradition
in order to migrate to Fix the agreement mistake
traditions
new
Add an article
a new
the new
country
.
In conclusion, every country
has its own government administrative process and a totally different culture
to follow. However
Add a comma
,However
as
my opinion who wants to live in a different Change preposition
in
country
should obey the customs of the country
and no one should influence anyone to follow the tradition
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