The growing of over weight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lesons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Globalisation

Globalization

and industrialization had put on some negative impact on people, due to which the number

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over weight

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overweight

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people are increasing and becoming

threat

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to the national health care system. In

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regard, few

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that proper physical education should be taught in the schools in order reduce the obesity

problem

,

such

as

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awareness

among the pupils and teenager. I completely agree with

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statement, and

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essay will provide

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reason

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for the support. To commence with, it is considered that learning any of the subjects at an early age may have an impact on life.

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, if

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proper guidance would be provided by the

intitutes

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institutes

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regarding

over weight

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then

the

messege

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message

would spread more

efficeintly

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efficiently

. To explain, children are the base of

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nation, and if any topic or issue, which a country

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have

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deliver to their public they always

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from the young age, because in that age children become aware and they get to know about the

problem

at very young.

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, due to

this

their future would be

more

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safer.

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, in India, there was

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campaign all around the country about eating

healthy

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diet. So, the council of India

,

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was facing the

problem

of not eating

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food.

Moreover

, the government decided to run a campaign in

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schools

so that the young

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may get about it and their future would be

in

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safer

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side. Moving

further

, teaching students at their schools about being healthy is

an

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supreme task.

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, the country's administration should deploy

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movement

rgarding

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regarding

over weight

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. While,

this

can be very superior, because, it

have

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plethoras of benefits,

such

as

,

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a student can explain about the same

problem

to their parents too.

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majority

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the majority

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of pupils,

therefore

, more number of people would be conscious. To conclude, it is

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moral duty of the government and even of the public, to take some initiation like campaigning in schools and colleges so that the children can get knowledge about obesity and its effect.