you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offered to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear sir/madam, I would like to inform you that my views are different at some point on the article of town centres are looked similar in the whole country. I have a valid reason for proving my statement right. As, I am living in Mississauga, Canada which is a very beautiful place. Its downtown is different from others, as everyone knows that downtowns are very congested due to a large number of shops ,

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, high volume of crowd is an obvious thing. But, the council of the Mississauga area noticed that thing and make a different concept to make everything smooth and amazing. The most attractive part of the town centre is the plantation, which gives greenish look to the metropolis.

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, the architecture is

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modern that allures the public and at night, the lighting is 'icing on the cake' . At

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, I would suggest you come here even once in your life so, you can explore the man-made beauty in my town. I hope you give a positive response to my statement. Yours sincerely, Raj

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing in response to
the article published in your newspaper
I would like to express my disagreement with
the claim made in the article that
I agree with some points raised in the article
However, I believe that there are significant differences in my town center
One notable difference is
Another way in which my town center stands out is
Furthermore,
In addition to
I would be more than happy to offer
a guided tour of my town
to the writer of the article

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