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you recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. write a letter to the manager of the hotel. in your letter 1- Say where you think left the papers 2- explain why they are so important 3- tell the manager what you want him to do

#hotel #home #papers #manager
Dear Sir/Dame, I am writing
this
 letter in need of your help. My name is Mateo Ferro. Yesterday, I went to your hotel for having a meeting in Charlton Hall at 3 pm.
Then
, I had dinner with my colleagues in a dining room. When I arrived home, I found out that I have lost my reports somewhere at the hotel. I Believe I might
left
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 it in a restroom closely to a dining room. I remembered I washed my hands after that. I could tell you that
this
 report is not only important to me but
also
 to my patients because it is about research on pediatric cancer that I have done with my patients for 3 years. I would like you to consider helping me to find it and inform me as soon as possible. I really appreciate your help. I look forward to your response. Yours Faithfully, Mateo Ferro
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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