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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In the present world,
businesses
 are trying hard to attract more
customers
 and spread their markets by promoting
products
 as fresh-making and new using different methods, including television, radio, newspapers, and social media. Even though promoting
products
 as new can bring to the
businesses
 many advantages, it can
also
 offer some negative effects to the commerce. From my point of view, I believe that persuading
customers
 by claiming that the
products
 are newly made can somehow become a negative development. There are numerous reasons why fields nowadays
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
 persuading
customers
 by saying that their
products
 are new, but only three will be outlined in
this
 paragraph.
Firstly
, promoting a product as newly made will surely make it sound attractive and catchy to the
customers
.
Therefore
, the
second
 reason, when a product sounds interesting enough that it catches the market’ eyes it is easier for the
businesses
 to convince their target to purchase.
Lastly
, the more purchasers the
businesses
 have, the more they will earn more profit. While promoting may give employment
such
 positive effects, there are
also
 various drawbacks that can be noted. Of course, these days, companies are controlling the abundance of advertisements that not all are approved by the governments. It means that some broadcast that appeared on television or radio that has the product presented as fresh and new might be falsely advertised. People might believe the claims made up by those commercials and decide to purchase.
As a result
, the customer got low-quality goods.
In addition
, not all
products
 promoted as new are appropriate for youth, so parents must keep in touch with their children. In conclusion,
businesses
 are using a variety of methods in order to spread their markets as large as possible, which will somehow give them more profit in return. By promoting
products
 as new can give both positive and negative effects.
Businesses
 can be benefited from
this
 while there are negative drawbacks to the market like a false endorsement and low-quality goods.
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