Some people argue that it is best to accept bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money .others believe that it is better to try and improve such situation . discuss both the views and give your opinion .

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some would rather accept the bad
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and the remaining would try to improve it .The best way to handle any bad
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as undesirable occupation or scarcity of wealth . They think that it is irrecoverable from
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they try to fix it in their own ways . Considering the views of the latter ,some
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of people opine that it is better to improve any
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rather than just giving up and accepting as it is .They believe that everyone should use permutation and combination to get out of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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