Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problems?

Some citizens are in debt by

acquiering

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acquiring

things

they don't need or can pay. it is important to educate

society

in

differentiate

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what are articles are considered as a primary necessity than what

are

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not.

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essay point out two reasons that lead to

people

get

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getting

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into

a

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apply

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debt which

are

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is

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compulsive buying

behavior

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behaviour

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and too much advertisement in

society

. One action to take to prevent

this

issue is to add

tax

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a tax

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on advertisements to regulate them and reduce their influence on

society

.

First

,

people

tend to buy

compulsitive

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compulsive

without knowing if

this

item is a primary

necesity

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necessity

for their family.

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Government

Goverment

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should invest

on

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in

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eduactional

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educational

education

programs to educate

society

and help them to be aware

what

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of what

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items are considered as a

first

neccesity

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necessity

to buy.

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,

this

will help

poeple

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people

to avoid buying

things

which

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that

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are

considere

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considered

vague, so they will reject buying

things

they can not pay

.

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for.

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Second

, Advertisements influenced the crowd to buy items that are on the

adds

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ads

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because

the

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they

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add

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ad

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suggest

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suggests

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that smart

people

belong to

this

type of high status.

Moreover

,

this

add

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adds

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invest huge amount of money to

convice

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convince

society

that they must have it.

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,

in

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apply

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the tv

add

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ad

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states "if you want to show that you have a successful life, you need to buy a

mercedes

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Mercedes

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car."

Hence

,

society

end

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it

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apply

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up getting a loan to buy

this

product which later on they can not afford to pay back.

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,

this

need

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to be regulated by social programs in which help

people

to understand that they really

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do

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don

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do

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not need to buy brands.

In other words

, the action that needs to be taken to prevent

people

get

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getting

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into debt is to reinforce laws that regulate advertisements by

add

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adding

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extra

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the extra

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tax to

this

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these

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frivolous items.

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way

people

will take into consideration that these products are not considered

a

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the

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main necessity to have a great life.

Therefore

,

this

label of

belong

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belonging

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into

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to

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a high class by having

this

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these

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expensive brands will

be reduce

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be reduced

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and eventually these ideas will

dissapear

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disappear

.

Also

,

people

will not want to spend

an

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extra money to buy an expensive car and will consider other options

instead

.

For example

,

Toyata

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Toyota

has

a

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great credibility to

made

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make

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durable cars

a

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at a

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low price . As a

reult

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result

,

this

law will help to

awake

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society

and think if they really want to throw their money away or look for other affordable options. To conclude, more

people

are getting into huge debts that they

woul

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would

not be able to pay

becuase

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because

they tend to buy frivolous

things

wihtout

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without

thinking if

this

is a real necessity. The two major reasons that bring

people

asking

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to ask

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for a loan are

unregulated

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advertisement and compulsive buying

behaviors

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behaviours

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.

However

,

this

can

be reduce

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be reduced

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by improving regulation on

adds

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ads

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and

create

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creating

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programs to make aware our

society

.