some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and up the world's fuel resources. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that there is a need for a restriction on

air

flights, because of the

air

pollution and rising prices on fuel internationally,

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but I

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disagree. In

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essay, I will outline various benefits of travelling in breeze travel and reasons for my opposition. The first and foremost reason is most public use travelling in a flight as a means of transport

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because

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is one of the easiest ways to commute from one place to another.

For instance

, to deal agreement of a business,or for any presentation, even students and families prefer travelling

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planes

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because

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is the easiest way of transport.

Moreover

,

air

travel is one of the world's largest

tourists

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place without any age limit and more convenient modes of transportation.

Secondly

,government and higher authorities are solely depending financially on

air

travel, because of the wide range of employment opportunities for the youth. To illustrate

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,in a tourism

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there are 500 million jobs because younger generations are more attracted to the basic pay and allowances.

Finally

,if there are any government restrictions on atmosphere travelling

due to

any environmental reasons

such

as breeze pollution or any mechanical issues,thousands of people are disappointed,

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can have a negative impact on the global economy.

Furthermore

,higher officials report public, if there are any mandatory disclosures of flights. So that

public

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the public

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can choose alternatives for travelling to desired locations. In conclusion, if

government

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the government

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provide any restrictions on travelling atmosphere flights because of the less supply of fuel.

However

, there are many solutions

of

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replacing fuel costs to continue flight journeys in

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the long

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term.