some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and up the world's fuel resources. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that there is a need for a restriction on
air
flights, because of the air
pollution and rising prices on fuel internationally, I
disagree. In Correct word choice
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this
essay, I will outline various benefits of travelling in breeze travel and reasons for my opposition.
The first and foremost reason is most public use travelling in a flight as a means of transport,
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this
is one of the easiest ways to commute from one place to another. For instance
, to deal agreement of a business,or for any presentation, even students and families prefer travelling in
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by
planes
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plane
this
is the easiest way of transport. Moreover
,air
travel is one of the world's largest tourists
place without any age limit and more convenient modes of transportation. Fix the agreement mistake
tourist
Secondly
,government and higher authorities are solely depending financially on air
travel, because of the wide range of employment opportunities for the youth. To illustrate this
,in a tourism department
there are 500 million jobs because younger generations are more attracted to the basic pay and allowances.
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department,
Finally
,if there are any government restrictions on atmosphere travelling due to
any environmental reasons such
as breeze pollution or any mechanical issues,thousands of people are disappointed, it
can have a negative impact on the global economy. Correct word choice
and it
Furthermore
,higher officials report public, if there are any mandatory disclosures of flights. So that public
can choose alternatives for travelling to desired locations.
In conclusion, if Correct article usage
the public
government
provide any restrictions on travelling atmosphere flights because of the less supply of fuel. Correct article usage
the government
However
, there are many solutions of
replacing fuel costs to continue flight journeys in Change preposition
for
long
term.Correct article usage
the long
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