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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time To what extent do you agree

#computers #languages #waste #time
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In recent years technology has become an integral part of our daily lives, including the way we communicate,
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, many are arguing that with the presence of fast precise
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 translators, learning new languages is not necessary anymore. In
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 I will be discussing why I completely disagree with
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, there are plenty of issues that are associated with
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, computers are not programmed to understand regional variations of languages.
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, if the internet crashes people will need
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 skills to communicate,
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 the internet is not accessible in some places in the world.
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, learning a new
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 will help us understand the cultural background of a country and break boundaries. And
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 , acquiring a new
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 improves our critical thinking and boosts our intelligence. A recent study that was conducted in the UK has shown that people who are multilingual are more flexible and creative than others who speak only one
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 they will have better job opportunities than others. Another fact is that a
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 is a machine that only can convert words from one
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 to another but without emotions. In conclusion.
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 is beneficial in several fields
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 as medical, engineering, calculations, But in the case of
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 translation. I think a person should learn a foreign
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 because it is very beneficial for his/her career.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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