2-More and more people are choosing to eat ready-made meals rather than freshly cooked food. Does this trend have more advantages than disadvantages?

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Nowadays

people

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have a lot of workload during the

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which is why they do not have time to cook.

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, ready-made

meals

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are preferred by

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day

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trend has advantages and disadvantages. As/since I am one of those who support healthy

food

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, eating ready-made

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has more disadvantages than advantages.

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of all, eating ready-made

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has certain disadvantages. If

people

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eat ready

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every

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, they can damage their health. Since ready-made

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are often made in factories, we have no idea about the

supplements

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in ready-made

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, and how they are made. Companies add some different chemicals/

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to make the

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tastier

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this

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food

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can contain unhealthy

supplements

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which cause cancer or diseases. Another drawback is the weight problem.

People

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who eat ready-made

meals

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gain/put on weight

day

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day

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, most of the

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who live in the U.S have obesity which is mainly caused by convenient

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. There are

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some advantages of convenient

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. Primarily, ready-made

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doesn't take time for the busy

people

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of modern life. They can eat fastly

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they can turn back to their work. Another advantage is that when we are outside, we can reach

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food

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easily.

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although

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some of those foods contain really innocent

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, we still have to know where they cook or how they cook

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food

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. In conclusion, ready-made

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facilitate our life in some situations. And those are really delicious foods but those have a lot of negative effects on us. If we can't control how many times we eat it in our daily life, it can affect our health badly. Cooking for ourselves is safer than read-made

meals

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. At least, we know the ingredients.

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2-More and more people are choosing to eat ready-made meals rather than freshly cooked food. Does this trend have more advantages than disadvantages?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

some people think that success in life comes form hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

Some think they can use as much fresh water as they want, but others say governments should limit water use because it is not endless. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say children no longer need to develop handwriting skills. Others believe that handwriting is still important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.