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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? It is a positive or negative development?

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Recently, many famous
people
 are richer than politicians, the main reasons for these are the changes in advertisement and the government
jobs
 seeing as community
jobs
. I consider a negative development as
people
prefers
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other kind
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another kind
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 of education and
jobs
. There are some reasons for
this
 change,
firstly
 with the attention given to the social network and their constant increase in numbers, advertisement rises inevitably
in
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 platforms like Instagram or Facebook, and
therefore
 almost every company decides to pay
to
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celebrities for those advertisements that previously were doing by tv channels or physical publicity.
For example
, is known that Kim Kardashian gets around six figures for sponsoring in some social network a new drink or pharmaceutical product.
Moreover
, in many countries the government
jobs
 as seen as community
jobs
 with great value to
the
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society, yet the financial retribution is less than other careers.
In other words
, a certain number of public administrations considers the politicians are similar to firefighters, rescuers and even healthcare workers, and
consequently
 their payment is lower than other professions.
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 illustrate
this
, in countries like Sweden or Finland,
people
 who work in public departments earn
lowest
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 salaries compare to countries in the Americas. Considering the previous explanation, I strongly believe it is not fair to find
this
 gap in salaries between politicians and famous
people
, since usually, the former plays a significant role in society as they decide about the future of each nation. Having a gigantic difference in salaries
,
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 could provoke in the following generations
an
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 increase in entertainment
jobs
 leaving behind other important professions.
For instance
, nowadays the percentage of
people
 that are choosing to apply to university or college is fewer than before, as they often wish to become celebrities on social networks
instead
 of
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 SOMETHING FORMAL
such
 as politics, engineering, law or medicine. In conclusion,
people
 who work for the public area gain less than celebrities because of social change and
therefore
 we are facing a negative transformation. I firmly believe that should be regulated by every country in order to have more balance in society.
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