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Tons of food are wasted all over the world. Causes and Solutions

It is astonishing that whilst millions of
people
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 lack steady
food
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 provide, tons of
food
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are
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 spoiled and end up in landfills in the world. Actions,
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, are needed to make a bridge in our communities between those
people
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 in need and to mitigate
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waste
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’s consequences. In
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 essay, I will attempt to outline some main reasons and practical measures for
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 issue. Wasted
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 mainly comes from retail companies in the
food
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 industry and households. In most supermarkets, vegetables, fruits and other perishable items which are overstocked in
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 cases are too abundant compared to the local demand. The excess
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 leads to almost one-fifth of
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 unsold and thrown away every day. In households, most uneaten leftovers and ruined
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 are results of poor cooking plans in advance.
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,
people
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 often go shopping without organising and estimating the amount of
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 they need.
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, leftovers are likely to be forgotten and thrown away at the end. There are several solutions to tackle
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 disturbing issue . It is a fair suggestion that retail shops should lower their expectation on the decoration of
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 cases and
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 just over the average consumer demand.
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 measure diminishes
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waste
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 in the shop
as well as help consumers
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 reduce the impulse to buy
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 excessively.
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, the abundant
display
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 is seen as a good trading policy so it is hard to persuade these businesses to halt it. In each household, well-planned shopping appears to be the best way to limit
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waste
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, along with other methods to take advantage of ruined
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 as composting or animal feeding.
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 but not least, the benefits of
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waste
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 reduction should be publiced more in local newspapers and social media. It is a common practice that
people
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 only follow guidances on limiting wasted
food
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 if they know why they have to do that.
Food
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waste
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 is caused by some reasons and deserves more concern to deal with. There are many measures helping to solve
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 problem.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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