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In the future, nobody will buy a printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this staement

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In the contemporary epoch, technology plays a paramount role, especially in reading. Some School groups argue that in the future nobody will buy printed
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,due to technology. Whatever
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 they want just Google it all the
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 are available on the Internet without any payment. I partially agree with
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 inculcated in the conclusion. now a day's online is easily find in everywhere. If the reader whatever
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 they want that's easily available in an online. Because of
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, there is no consumption of time, to go to the bookshop to purchase a
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 in the hustle and bustle days. In another reason is there is no cause of environmental pollution,
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 in the
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 days people
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cut trees to make paper,which leads to Deforestation it is one of the main problems.
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 online reading is much beneficial.
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, which causes myriad drawbacks to humans. The
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 and foremost thing is health issues. To make my point clear, if any person continuously
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 on the internet, while it leads to Site
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 full stress on Brain. Not only site issue , but
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 effect on the concentration level. Another aspect is there is no completely true messages or reliable News there are not presented on that platform, plenty of misleading information is available on the internet.
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, some printing press employees or owners, whose total families rely on
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 business lose
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 bread and butter. Overall, it can be seen that there are several reasons to
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 online or to
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 printed
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. As per as I am strongly concerned that
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 reading is best compared to online
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. overwhelming advantages to read in printed
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 or newspapers. In my proception in the future people have some conscious about there health,whose definitely to
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 on printed
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