many people like to go on holiday abroad,while others believe it is better to visit places within their own country. discuss both views and give your opinion

Certain individuals are of the opinion of spending their break period in a foreign agrarian

while

some set of people enjoys staying back in their homey in other to explore exciting site around them.

This

essay will agree with having vacation spent abroad as my opinion because it gives

oppourtiunity

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opportunity

for relaxation and enjoyment and

also

it adds to

ones

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knowledge

. Meanwhile, both views will be discussed with explanations and relevant examples.

Firstly

, using

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free

periods

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in a familiar environment gives room for more exploitation and conserve money in that person will be able to view as many

area

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as he or she can at a very low cost compared to the bill of going outside the

provincial

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.The time one will spend

in

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planning to travel abroad would have been used to hit some other zone around.

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, during the festive period,

i

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had a huge time for myself to stopover at various

spot

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that

i

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have

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not been to in my neighbourhood with little

charges

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and

this

, made me

be

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able to have fun in different amusement

community

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. On

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other hand,

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it might be expensive

having

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holidays spent in a foreign agrarian I think it

worth

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it since it will enable someone to have

knowledge

of different cultures apart from that of his agrarian and

also

, gives room for relaxation and enjoyment since there is nothing to distract or disturb individual from having enough fun.A typical example was my husband"

s

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's

experience when he had his annual leave spent abroad

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previous year,no one

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called him for emergency surgery as his mobile line was not reachable and he explained

different

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types of food delicacies he ate when he was away.He

also

talked about the various modes of dressing he saw in the homey he went to.Assuming he had not gone outside the

provincial

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,he might not have had

this

additional

knowledge

. In summary,vacation is best spent outside the bucolic for advanced

knowledge

,though it may be expensive and weekends can be used to interview interesting

region

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around one environment since it's less time and

money consuming

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