Some say that people should diet and exercise to lose weight, while others think they should eat better and change their lifestyle

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day, we all live western busy life due to our work
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opt to follow not validated diet schedules & less fat
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to sudice weight. It is my okrasovation that.
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of going for
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kind of
lifestyle
, they could have fresh
food
and improve
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. routine. It has become a habit for
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food
or pre-cooked dishes, due to lack of time. Over and above
this
packed
food
contains high sugar and chemical preservatives.
This
leading to
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of late,
people
have been in
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of being weight. The
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Cooking
using
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fresh vegetables and
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ingredients.
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,
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to de't and Exercise to
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weight, 2t is time taking
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change
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lifestyle
and
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basit, It will for sure
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result. Learning How to cook with frush
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is the Pomportant an aspect of having
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way and carry out some sports activity avoiding pre-
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and chemical or
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foods can
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a healthy life To conclude,
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lifestyle
and рові quality
food
lead to long-term health
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people
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address and change
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habit and
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help and had & happier and healthier life.
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