Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays, individuals like to have
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that
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for a couple of months in a year and spend the rest of the
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doing other activities. In
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situation, I agree that a certain group of
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having temporary
jobs
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is beneficial since they have enough money, for most
people
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, full-
time
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jobs
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is a better option. On the one hand, I do agree that
people
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who choose to do a temporary
job
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and use the other
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to do what they want is beneficial.
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, they may need a higher awareness of
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and money management.
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, the individuals would like to use less
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to work so their
income
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may not be quite as stable as full-
time
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workers. In order to do whatever they want without a
job
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, they may need better
time
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and money management.
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, those who chose a short-period
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may have more spare
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to recover their body.
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, there are several drawbacks to be considered. The main disadvantage is the
job
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and
income
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may be unstable for
people
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to make the decision to work for a short period of
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.
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, they may not be suitable for
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who already have a family. In my opinion, the
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for temporary
jobs
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may not be enough to raise a family especially for those with kids.
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, the tax
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for a country like Taiwan may not be benefitted from the
people
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who chose to have a temporary
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since their yearly
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may not reach the basic standard need to pay tax. In conclusion, I believe there are several pros for the
people
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who make the choice to work a few months. At the same
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, we can not ignore the drawbacks at the same
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • pursue
  • self-development
  • life satisfaction
  • balance
  • job security
  • financial instability
  • stress and anxiety
  • unemployment
  • long-term financial commitments
  • diverse experiences
  • employability
  • broader perspective
  • adaptable
  • innovative
  • career progression
  • benefits
  • personal growth
  • financial security
  • invest
  • career milestones
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