Your share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.

Dear sir/madam, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter regarding of some issue with my
room
-mate. My name is June and I stay in unit 3. I have lots of problems with my share mate because she has made so much
noice
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noise
while I
am study
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, and I have been
meantioned
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mentioned
to her
few
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a few
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times. Unfortunately, she has not
pay
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attentioned
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attention
of
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my
complained
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.
First
Issue 1, she has involved a lot of friends to come to
visited
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her at night and they are talked so lough in the
room
.
Aslo
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Also
As
every weekend she has parties in the house, they will
cooked
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dinner and play games, sometimes they even have a singing night. it is so stressful to live with someone like
this
. I need to prepare
my
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final exam soon, and I am a slow learner so that, I hope you can organise a different
room
for me,
then
I can
concerntrate
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concentrate
study. Could you please let me know when I can move out
from
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this
room
and I would like to have a single
room
.
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I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you. Yours sincerely June
Submitted by junechan822 on

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hostel warden
  • cohabitation
  • disruptive behavior
  • communal living
  • academic performance
  • conducive to studying
  • nocturnal activities
  • amicable resolution
  • accommodation request
  • policy enforcement
  • distraction
  • sleep deprivation
  • noise level
  • mediate
  • courtesy
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