Some people believe that modern technology encourages more sociable behaviour. Others say that this leads to lesser sociable behaviour. Discuss both views with examples and provide your opinion.

Altgough
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technical
aspects
fashion a
lot
of
well
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attitude
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in
society
but it reduces the human well behave. There are both advantages and disadvantages to
this
argument. From my perspective, there is no alternative
way
using
of
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technology to create positive
aspects
in
the
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society
.
To begin
with, we are now
submersed
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in
the
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digital
systems
. We have to do a
lot
of
things
. To accomplish these works in a very short time we have to
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a
lot
of criteria. Digital
systems
are the
way
where it can drive people in
a
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critical
things
and remove
him
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various
aspects
. As a consequence, electronic
systems
provides
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a flexible path. It moulds a person's character in a cognitive
way
.
Thus
, technology forms a man expression
whrere
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where
they can use it in their practical life.
Such
a thing that
human
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has to achieve in a long time they can now acquire
this
in a very short time.
For instance
, in ancient people just use only letters and it creates hinder for them to recognise human's mentality. Using
facebook
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, messenger etcetera they could learn about
the
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facial expression.
On the other hand
, it
construct
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a mix-up
affect
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effect
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. Persons are now learning various
things
which create a
confilct
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conflict
in the
society
.
As a result
, they engage themselves in a quaint situation. It
also
scamps them in a furious situation where they cannot get rid of themselves from
this
dangerous situation.
Moreover
, a man's behaviour is relegating
day
by
day
where it creates a
lot
of lure in the
society
and there forms strikes, disappearance etcetera. People's brains are getting demotivated
day
by
day
and they are misleading
the
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society
periodically.
For example
,
internet
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the internet
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provides unethical
systems
where a person acquires it and implements it in
the
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society
which shows a lack of social behaviour. In conclusion, technical
things
are favourable to lead the
society
in a good
way
.
Nevertheless
, accepting
of
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inaccurate
aspects
can create social distress. I am
on
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opinion
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, technology is the best solution to create good ones in social
systems
.
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