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In some countries people who have high incomes pay very high taxes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for individuals and for the country as a whole? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In many nations across the globe, individuals who earn more must pay more in
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 of
income
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tax
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. While there may be benefits of paying high-
income
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tax
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 for both individuals and a
country
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, there are some downsides to it as well.
To begin
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 with,
people
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 who pay more
tax
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 may be able to get
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higher
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refunds
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 if they are able to show their expenses and their current financial situation at the end of a financial year.
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, many mining professionals who earn around six figures annually can claim a large amount in
tax
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 return when they show their expenses and other offsets entitled to them by the government in Australia.
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, they can save their
tax
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 return or perhaps invest it wisely to make more money. For a
country
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, more
income
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tax
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 means more revenue a
country
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 can generate by taxing the rich and top earners,
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 means that a
country
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 has more money to spend for uplifting the standard of living of its citizens.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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 may have accumulated debt, and even if they are earning high amounts, they still may not be able to pay it in the planned time due to high-
income
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tax
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.
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, in the United States, more than 50% of
people
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 aged above forty are still paying their loans for higher studies despite being amongst the highest earners in the
country
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 as a part of their
income
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 is taken by the government in the form of
tax
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.
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, a
country
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 that relies on
income
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tax
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 for its revenue may experience financial difficulties during times of economic uncertainty. During times of recession, many
people
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 lose their jobs and some have their salaries reduced,
thus
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 resulting in a decrease in revenue for a
country
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. In conclusion, there is no doubt that there are advantages for any
country
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 and its citizens
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 if their high earners pay more
tax
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,
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, there is
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 no denying that some
people
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 and countries may feel the negatives of
such
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 a policy.

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