Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays people can allocate some
time
for their hobbies. We will discuss further
on this
topic and why there is an increase in numbers? Also
affects individuals as well as society.
There was an age where people can't spend their date
other than jobs and children's upbringing., Fix the agreement mistake
dates
however
in recent ,Fix the agreement mistake
times
time
there is a notable change in everybody's life. An individual person taking a break from their day-to-day routine to enjoy their leisure Add a comma
,time
time
because of, I reckon, a Nuclear family with a maximum of one or two children. Working parents,
will well be paying jobs, they can afford a maid and supporting amenities Remove the comma
apply
such
as washing machine, vacuum cleaner which leaves allows them to have their own time
. For example
, my mom lived in the joined family, she used to wake up early in the morning, prepare meals , send kids to school, tuition them in the evening and then
the rest of will be the task of preparing things for tomorrow. furthermore
, take care of their in-laws and other family members. Thus
never allowed her any own space.
For a single person - it allows taking the benefit of enjoying their own space. In their free time
they indent to do some hobbies like, gardening, pottering, etc.. these are the activities worked as stress busters which help them to have a relaxing Add a comma
,time
time
, focus on things and so on. For society - the small workshops have been increasing and the number of self-employment too. For instance
, a nuclear family mother did less work and which gave her some time
for gardening. To support her hobbies she is attending workshops and purchasing necessary things from plant shops, thus
eventually, created many small institutions and tripling plant shops.
To conclude, individuals are benefited from the nuclear family structure which allowed them to utilize their leisure time
to reduce their stress, in addition
to that, this
effect has a great impact on the growth of self-employment in our society.Submitted by gomathi10.ch on
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