Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others think that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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that it is totally good to kick off their own professional

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after completing their whole study,

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school.These are two extreme two

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their own pros and cons.In my

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with regard to entering the university studies and

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field. Starting up the professional

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faster than those who don't have it, Generally educated

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beverage company CEO by BBC broadcast where CEO expressed that "they are seeing that fully

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in their work where they can understand the context more quickly and deeper.

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good work experiences they may

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good

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position in their professional

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while that time only university students start their

career

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to

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good professional careers at the retirement age it

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to finished of all their professional

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up their

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those

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their students to complete their studies before starts their

career

because

as a result

of the completion those

people

can progress well in their

career

ladder.