Nowadays doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patient's health, no matter how rich they are. Do you agree or disagree?

Jakarta, 12 January 2022 To: Respected Recruitment Officer, Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Programme Dear Sir or Madam, I am Novita Sari, graduated (GPA 3.77 of 4.00) from Kwik Kian Gie School of Business, Jakarta, Indonesia, in 2015, majoring in Economics, concentrating in Auditing. I highly commit to
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Degree program; 1. Master of Finance of Cornivus University of Budapest, 2. Master of Finance of Budapest University of Technology and Economics. sincerely yours.
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