One problem face by almost every larger city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

It is undeniable that traffic jam remains a serious problem

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in nations that

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a high population . I think that

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issue has several certain causes and there are several effective approaches that should be taken in order to address

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issue . On the one hand , the major cause of

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phenomenon is the growing economy that

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in the world in recent years , which led to an increase in the number of vehicles on the road .

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, the wealth of many nations has increased and

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the financial situation of their citizens become more convenient to purchase their own cars and

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the number of drivers on the road becomes more significant .

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, the lack of space remains an important reason for the congested roads

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in developing countries which have shown growth of population and

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multiples of the

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are built and engender a problem of insufficient space for driving .

On the other hand

, there are several effective approaches that can address

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issue and help to solve it .

Firstly

, the government should improve and develop public transportation in order to make

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convenient for citizens and

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encourage them to use it ,especially for a short distance.

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, the

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should encourage the population to use bicycles as an economic and ecological way of transport and can reduce the level of traffic jams.

Finally

, the authority should force the drivers to pay a strong penalty for those who wish to drive every day ,

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tax can be used to improve transport infrastructure and develop public transportation . In conclusion , I believe that mainly lack of space and economic growth causes traffic jams.

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,

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problem can be solved by taking special measures

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as encouraging the use of public transport and bicycle and

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establishing penalties for drivers .