You ordered two items through the internet and you received two different items. Write a letter to the manager: Explain about what you ordered. Ask why the two other items were different. Ask about how he would solve this problem.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding the two products that I have purchased from the company’s website. Actually, I have received different items than

that

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I have ordered, it seems to be a mistake done. In fact, it is the

first

time I am dealing with your enterprise. As a matter of fact, I chose two dresses from your store and ordered them from the attached website mentioned on the page. Indeed, one of the clothes is a white silky dress that has red flowers which gave it an attractive appearance.

However

, the other is a black short outfit that I picked it up for

the

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evening occasions. Actually, I would ask

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explanation from your side about what happened.

Moreover

, I would request an answer to know if the mistake has

done

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by your employees or by the delivery company.

Additionally

, I have left a complaint message on the page but I received no replies. I would suggest that the HR department informs the staff to search if they sent the wrong order.

Furthermore

, I would ask if it is possible to send me again my purchased items,

otherwise

, I request from your enterprise to return my money and

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financial compensation for my waste time. Your prompt action will be highly appreciated. Faithfully yours,

Mrs.

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Mrs

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Ghina Tarhini

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