Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It goes without saying that mother earth has nurtured miscellaneous life forms since the alleged big bang and is expected to continue doing so. There are two contradicting views about the recent concern of environmental alteration on the planet, the
first
of which claims that humans need to go as far as they can to preserve the earth while the other refers to these efforts as unnecessary. From my perspective,
although
the former notion can be supported with a decent argument, the other one holds more ground. As for the advocation of the
first
belief, it is, by and large, believed that life, as in its current form, tremendously depends on the climate and environment.
In other words
, if the condition degrades, residents of the plant are quite likely to encounter detrimental repercussions. As all life forms are in crucial need of natural resources to survive,
this
could be deemed substantially vital. To illustrate, the water level changes, which are due to the melting of glaciers, impact the ecosystem marine creatures live in and to some extent the humans who feed on or consume them in other ways.
Similarly
, the loss of natural habitats for some species could have negative effects on them and
consequently
mankind.
Therefore
, it is deemed an alarming problem to deal with.
On the contrary
, the aforementioned adversity is considered insoluble to some others. One of the stepping stones of
this
argument is that the problem is far too gargantuan and widespread to be sufficiently tackled or mitigated.
Although
some short term solutions have proven slightly practical and promising, the big picture remains quite perplexing since it requires the cooperation of nations and citizens across the board, not all of whom have shown the enthusiasm for embarking on the challenge.
Furthermore
, the planet we are living on has gone through more severe hassles and difficulties before, and it has managed to adapt time and time again.
For instance
, several species used to roam
this
planet, most of which have gone extinct, not influencing the course of nature significantly.
Thus
, the earth itself has the capacity and history of getting to grips with these changes and coming to peace terms with them. In conclusion, having contemplated
over all
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provided reasons, I tend to opine that adhering to the conservative way of environment present profound aspects for future of the world, progressing with
this
disaster should not be neglected.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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