One problem faced by almost every large city if traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

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Most modern
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have populations of over 1 million or so. All these
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commute to and from their workplace which is some distance away from their residence.
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, across the world, the movement of a lot of
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over a short duration of time causes
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congestion. In the following paragraphs, we shall examine
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subject with relevant examples.
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, most large
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, or metros, are not planned to accommodate huge movement of
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. They expand and contract as per demand.
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, Surat, a small trading town, saw sudden and rapid urbanization after the diamond industry settled there, and
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the public transport system there has remained inadequate.
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forces
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to use personal vehicles and cause
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congestion.
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, these many metros are fractured into business districts and residential areas in an unplanned way.
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, on a daily basis, millions of
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travel on narrow roads and lanes in a haphazard manner, causing
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jams.
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, the wholesale grain market of Mumbai is right at the city centre, forcing huge trucks to enter the city and choke the roads.
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, the vehicular management systems of these
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are primitive. In Kolkata,
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, even today, a
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cop manages key city junctions and not an automated system based on
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cameras. In
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context, one solution is to create efficient public transport systems, like in London and to encourage
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to use them. Another solution is that companies can stagger their working hours and ask their employees to work from home, as much as possible. Some
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, like Stockholm, encourage
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to cycle to work
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of using vehicles. Other
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also
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should take up
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example. In conclusion,
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congestion is caused by the haphazard movement of vehicles over a short period of time, and the best way to deal with it is to encourage
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to minimize their travel and to use public transport.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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