In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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the information on the change in the total of
gym
members
by gender throughout the year of 2017 in Miami and Florida. Over the conducted research, it can be spotted that the most visited month of the
gym
by the local habitats is June. A more detailed look at the given graph affords to infer that approximately 850 men and 700 women visited the health club in the research year.
Besides
,
such
a tendency remained during the summer,
however
, the
number
of
members
has embarked to dwindle since September.
Likewise
, it can be noticed a significant decline in figures from the period of October to December.
Also
is noteworthy that the health club was not so common at the beginning of the year and compared to figures on summer the
number
of males and females, who visited the
gym
, was lower in twice. The pie chart provides information about membership of
this
club by age. According to the chart, we can conclude that the half of
members
is composed of people, who age are between 21 and 45 years.
Nevertheless
, ageing people do not prefer to visit the health centre and the
number
of males and females consists of 25% and 31% respectively.
In addition
, we can observe the
third
group of others, who visit
such
a
gym
,
however
, the
number
of these
members
is not so substantial.
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