The two maps give information about the change of Happy Valley Shopping Centre from 1982 to 2012.
The two maps give information about the change
of
Happy Valley Shopping Centre from 1982 to 2012.
In the bottom left corner of the map Change preposition
in
was
trees and the entrance to the lobby Correct subject-verb agreement
were
area
was cleared to make way for a parking lot. The lake was recovered by trees was replaced by the
furniture retail. The coffee shop on the left shopping Correct article usage
apply
area
was knocked-down, the
food Correct word choice
and the
store
was nearby similarly
, to building a sports store
and electronics store
with a larger store
.
The most noticeable was that themed restaurants have been constructed near the area
entertainment
. Over the past 30 years, the position of Change preposition
of entertainment
the
furniture was substituted by a food Correct article usage
apply
store
. Finally
, the toilets and four elevators on the left-hand map have been stay
constant.
Change the verb form
staying
stayed
Overall
, the Shopping Central experienced the
number of dramatic changes with the Correct article usage
a
area
were
expanded. Change the verb form
was
However
, the entertainment area
in the middle position has been kept stable.Submitted by ctttismi on
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