ANIMAL SPECIES ARE BECOMING EXTINCT DUE TO HUMAN ACTIVITIES ON LAND AND IN SEA. DISCUSS THE REASONS AND SOLUTIONS

Over the years, several animal species have become extinct or are facing the threat of extinction. Usually, a species remains for about 1000 years on
this
planet before becoming extinct,
however
,
this
process ​has accelerated now. There are several deep-rooted reasons
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, so, let us analyze these in a systematic manner.
Firstly
 is the loss of habitat due to urbanization and deforestation.
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, Flamingoes, Cranes, Kingfishers and Vultures have all
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 because they have lost breeding grounds to buildings and roads.
Secondly
,
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many animals

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 are mindlessly poached and brutally killed for their fur,
for example
, minks and crocodiles are freely hunted despite efforts by conservationists.
Thirdly
,animals are exploited as an expendable source of nutrition.
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, mindless fishing has led to a drastic fall in the numbers of the Hilsa fish, a delicacy in India and Bangladesh. Fourthly, industries and farms discharge toxic waste into water bodies, which kill the flora and fauna and those that survive, become sick and diseased. So, can there be a solution? Most certainly!
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, we should enact and enforce laws to protect and
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foster wildlife

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.
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,
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the wildlife
the wild life

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 Act in India prevents the export and sale of
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Indian wildlife

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Secondly
, we should invest in research to breed
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endangered animals

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 in captivity, and later release them in the wild. The Alligator centre at Chennai is a
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 of breeding and conserving
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wild animals

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Thirdly
, we should provide alternate means of survival to tribals and poachers who compete with the
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wild animals

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, we should invest in de-polluting oceans, rivers and lakes to save
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aquatic wildlife

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. In conclusion, there are multiple reasons for the extinction of
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 and we should systematically take steps to save them
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