ANIMAL SPECIES ARE BECOMING EXTINCT DUE TO HUMAN ACTIVITIES ON LAND AND IN SEA. DISCUSS THE REASONS AND SOLUTIONS
Over the years, several animal species have become extinct or are facing the threat of extinction. Usually, a species remains for about 1000 years on
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 is the loss of habitat due to urbanization and deforestation.Linking Words
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, Flamingoes, Cranes, Kingfishers and Vultures have all Linking Words
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 are mindlessly poached and brutally killed for their fur,Correct your spelling
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, minks and crocodiles are freely hunted despite efforts by conservationists.Linking Words
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,animals are exploited as an expendable source of nutrition.Linking Words
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, mindless fishing has led to a drastic fall in the numbers of the Hilsa fish, a delicacy in India and Bangladesh. Fourthly, industries and farms discharge toxic waste into water bodies, which kill the flora and fauna and those that survive, become sick and diseased.
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, we should enact and enforce laws to protect and Correct your spelling
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 Act in India prevents the export and sale of Correct your spelling
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Indian wildlife
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, we should provide alternate means of survival to tribals and poachers who compete with the Linking Words
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In conclusion, there are multiple reasons for the extinction of Correct your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite