Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In our contemporary society, getting a
university
education
is been the best way
to become successful in life
. But some people
disagree about that. This
essay will discuss my
both these views and give my opinion.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
First
of all, people
who study in university
had knowledge about their major. University
education
takes them about 4-5 year
to complete the major, so they will take a lot of time to research about that. Fix the agreement mistake
years
For example
, research by Queen University
in 2010 showed that many high school student studies for the final test to graduate from the
high school, which depend on their mark Correct article usage
apply
to
admission to the school. We can be clearly seen Change preposition
for
that
the importance of getting a Correct word choice
apply
university
education
.
On the other hand
, people
who did not a
Correct the article-noun agreement
a university student
university students
university
students still
Add a missing verb
are still
successful
in Replace the word
succeed
life
. Instead
, they will have life
experiences such
as presentation skills, communication skills, and marketing skills. For instance
, in my family, people
who were born in ’70s
usually do not study at Change the article
the ’70s
university
, but now they are still successful people
in various fields and also
provide their family and their children a good life
. So, getting a university
is not the only way
to succeed in life
.
In conclusion, I think getting a university
education
can not be decided human’s life
. To become successful in life
, we need to choose a way
which
is suitable for our decision. Correct pronoun usage
that
Additionally
, learning a new language such
as English, Japanese, and Chinese is also
a good way
to have a good job and success in life
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