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Some believe that people will purchase a product based on their needs and advertising is not needed.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the past decade,
the
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marketing as a profession saw drastic growth.
Although
 many people believe that they have complete control over their brain when purchasing a product, others are of the opinion that the advertisement has the significant
imapct
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impact
 on our decision making. In
this
 essay, I will elaborate on why I think that marketing,
nevertheless
, plays an important role.
To begin
 with, these days, ads are
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 inevitable part of our daily lives. Sometimes, our mind does not even wonder
buying
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certain
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product
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products
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, unless we see
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 being promoted.
This
 happens
espacially
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especially
 with not
necessery
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necessary
 products, including different gadgets or home decors,
for instance
. Since we can not anymore watch TV, YouTube and even walk on streets without being exposed to marketing in different shapes,
such
 as
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bilboards
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billboard
billboards
 or
a
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pop-up ads.
Hence
, the more advertisements we notice, the more we will consider buying mentioned products.
Furthermore
, the development of the psychology of
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marketing as a science
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 has been happening at an abnormal pace. Psychologists are getting deeper and deeper inside the human brain, providing them with a
powerdul
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powerful
 tool for
controling
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controlling
 our minds.
For example
, there are many experiments suggesting that every colour has
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 effect on our emotions or that certain words are more powerful than others.
Therefore
, even though we might feel like marketing does not affect us at all, on a subconscious level we are, in fact, not making decisions completely
independetly
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independently
independent
. To sum up, I firmly believe that shopping, without additional ads, would look completely different,
as a result
 of the powerful
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impact
 of the marketing.
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Consequently
, buying products is not entirely based on our needs.
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