More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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internet

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is doing

vital

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role in peoples’ daily life

routine

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practise

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, most

of

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the

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online

users

or social network

users

are used to

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their personal details in social networking sites as well as internet banking portals.

This

habit has produced numerous advantages to the

users

and there

are

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certain

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number of drawbacks. The primary advantage of

storage

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personal

data

into a device

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will

be avoid

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repetitive entering

data

, whenever using the particular network. As per the current globalized world,

time

is money, since

this

kind of storage will definitely save

the

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considerable amount of

time

.

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, most

of

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the

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people are engaging with various

kind

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kinds

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of applications, especially for

ecommerce

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eCommerce

e-commerce

platforms for their

day today

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requirements. As examples of, payments in supermarkets, restaurants, payments for utility bills and online transferring, procedures can be made convenient and

time

saver by personal

data

storage. Despite,

this

type of personal

data

saving in web portals or social networking sites are not completely safe. According to recent news and reliable information, concealing personal

data

, which has

saved

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in social media logins, are reasonably difficult

from

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data

hackers.

The professional

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hackers can easily enter to personal information of other

individual

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individuals

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and they can manipulate them in fraudulent activities or criminal circumstances. In conclusion, entering and personal

data

in online platforms, undoubtedly save

users

time

and make the daily lifestyle to

comfortable

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a comfortable

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level. But there are considerable disadvantages of

data

leaking, which can be

threat

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a threat

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, to individuals as well

economy

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the economy

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. In my opinion, authorities need to take necessary legitimate actions to protect personal

data

in public portals to avoid criminal offences.