In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?
The advertising industry is one of the most important topics for producers. They insist on their products which are produced in a new way. Some of them lie in
this
way and this
is not the right way of selling. Its cons are more than pros and I think it is a negative point for development.
First of all, more sale
is the right goal of producers. Fix the agreement mistake
sales
Although
, when they lie and give the wrong information to customers they are betraying their customers and it is not acceptable. Wrong advertisements lead people to buy something which is not useful for them. Correct word choice
However
For example
, when my child wants to buy a doll based on its television advertising, after buying she faced
something that she had before and it does not have a new facility. So it will be an unuseful toy for her. Wrong verb form
faces
Thus
, not only did she waste her money on nothing new, but also
she fell blue. Due to
these effects, cones are uncountable in this
matter. Because emotional devasting
is not a countable subject.
Replace the word
devastation
Furthermore
, businesses that are improving their sales by these kinds of lying, think about its short pros. Their benefits might be increased in the short term time. But, they do not mention that people will understand their lies sooner than they think. So, they tell each other do
not to buy that product and after that, their customers will drop and they should close their company if they do not solve Unnecessary verb
apply
this
problem as soon as possible. For instance
, Lili company which had produced some toys for children, but
could not remain in a stable mood because of its lie about Correct word choice
apply
new
design of products Correct article usage
the new
due to
advertisements which they were not new.
In conclusion, some negative points sometimes have positive influences in a short time, but in long
term, they can destroy the whole project forever.Correct article usage
the long
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