In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays most of the
world
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population is adopting
western
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style
fashion
. The purpose
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doing
this
is to make ourselves comfortable and that’s a good thing.
However
, on the other
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there is a negative impact of
this
on our current and upcoming ,
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because we are losing our
tradition
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and
culture
. In the current ,time everyone is trying to wear
western-style
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clothes because those styles are more trendy and more relaxed to wear. Jeans pants,
3 piece
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suits or T-shirts are usually
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part of
west
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fashion
. By the
way
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that’s true if we follow
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clothing
then
we can easily
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in
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western
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community and get a feeling
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part of that society. Whoever follows that
fashion
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people surrounding them start making some irrelevant perception that these people are wealthy and they are more educated and more powerful. It's not bad that we are following
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clothing but at the same ,time we have
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in our mind that we have our own
culture
and own
values
. We have to keep those traditions alive
otherwise
after some years our generation will not see our
culture
as what our forefathers made, and that will be the end of that
culture
. In my
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following completely
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culture
is a negative thing because it is vanishing our own
values
. But I agree on
this
point as well that to move with the world we cannot completely leave
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fashion
. We have to keep in mind that we have our
values
and at least on traditional occasions we have to wear our traditional clothes so in
this
way our future generation at least will be connected to our
values
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • cultural homogenization
  • western-style dress
  • traditional clothing
  • cosmopolitan
  • modernity
  • fashion preferences
  • cultural identity
  • conformity
  • practicality
  • multinational corporations
  • socio-economic factors
  • cross-cultural
  • cultural appreciation
  • diversity
  • influence
  • heritage
  • textiles
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