In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, advertisement is
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part of marketing. Their approach is emphasizing that their goods are new in some way. I think that the cons might be more than pons.
Firstly
, people are attracted to new specialities. Particularly international brands know, and they use more new
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while
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their
product
.
For example
, Apple releases a new
product
which is iPhone, MacBook every year. If we compare
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product
with
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product
, we clearly see they are not differentiated in terms of
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much,
however
advertisement tells
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model is so new and different, it doesn’t show similarity others, which is important for making sales.
Thus
, businesses persuade the customer that their
product
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new, and
then
clients want that for
this
reason.
However
, there are various drawbacks that may be noted. Many adverts saying that they are new and singular open a road
a lots
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of pollution. As production
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, humans tend to
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. They want to renovate their wares which is why redundant shoppings cause
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climate change.
Over consumption
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has been continuing
this
century and that would be more dangerous for
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of the earth, especially it causes global warming. In conclusion, I consider that has more dark sides than sunny sides in emphasizing they are renovating. Those
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advertisements are not beneficial which is why I think it is negative development
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innovation
  • Fast-paced
  • Distinguishing
  • Psychological aspect
  • Inherently
  • Perceived
  • Continuous improvement
  • Revolutionary
  • Feasible
  • Throwaway culture
  • Undervalue
  • Longevity
  • Obscure
  • Novelty
  • Unsatisfactory
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