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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, advertisement is
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 part of marketing. Their approach is emphasizing that their goods are new in some way. I think that the cons might be more than pons.
Firstly
, people are attracted to new specialities. Particularly international brands know, and they use more new
theme
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 while
launch
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 their
product
.
For example
, Apple releases a new
product
 which is iPhone, MacBook every year. If we compare
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product
 with
new
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a new
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product
, we clearly see they are not differentiated in terms of
specialties
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 much,
however
 advertisement tells
new
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 model is so new and different, it doesn’t show similarity others, which is important for making sales.
Thus
, businesses persuade the customer that their
product
in
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 new, and
then
 clients want that for
this
 reason.
However
, there are various drawbacks that may be noted. Many adverts saying that they are new and singular open a road
a lots
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 of pollution. As production
increase
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, humans tend to
wastage
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. They want to renovate their wares which is why redundant shoppings cause
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climate change.
Over consumption
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 has been continuing
this
 century and that would be more dangerous for
future
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 of the earth, especially it causes global warming. In conclusion, I consider that has more dark sides than sunny sides in emphasizing they are renovating. Those
of
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advertisements are not beneficial which is why I think it is negative development
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innovation
  • Fast-paced
  • Distinguishing
  • Psychological aspect
  • Inherently
  • Perceived
  • Continuous improvement
  • Revolutionary
  • Feasible
  • Throwaway culture
  • Undervalue
  • Longevity
  • Obscure
  • Novelty
  • Unsatisfactory
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