In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, advertisement is

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part of marketing. Their approach is emphasizing that their goods are new in some way. I think that the cons might be more than pons.

Firstly

, people are attracted to new specialities. Particularly international brands know, and they use more new

theme

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while

launch

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their

product

For example

, Apple releases a new

product

which is iPhone, MacBook every year. If we compare

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product

with

new

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product

, we clearly see they are not differentiated in terms of

specialties

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much,

however

advertisement tells

new

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model is so new and different, it doesn’t show similarity others, which is important for making sales.

Thus

, businesses persuade the customer that their

product

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new, and

then

clients want that for

this

reason.

However

, there are various drawbacks that may be noted. Many adverts saying that they are new and singular open a road

a lots

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of pollution. As production

increase

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, humans tend to

wastage

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. They want to renovate their wares which is why redundant shoppings cause

the

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climate change.

Over consumption

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has been continuing

this

century and that would be more dangerous for

future

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of the earth, especially it causes global warming. In conclusion, I consider that has more dark sides than sunny sides in emphasizing they are renovating. Those

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advertisements are not beneficial which is why I think it is negative development

further

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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4 paragraphs

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting description of the correlation of the table that follow. Write at least 150 words.

Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons is it possitive or negative development?

It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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