Many companies offer their employees the opportunity to work from home. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home for the company. And give your own opinion.

These days, more and more people have the opportunity to work from
home
as a result
of the advancements that the internet has brought. There are both, positive and negative aspects. In
this
essay, I will look at both sides and elaborate on why I think that
pros
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of the absence of a need for being present in the office are far
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stronger than
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cons. The main advantage of doing your job from
home
is that it allows you to adjust your working hours
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your needs. Apart from that, it can save you a great amount of time and realise you from pressure to a great extent, all leading to
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higher level of productivity and more leisure time. A great illustration of
this
is the worker travelling half an hour to
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office in each way, taking care of the kids at the same time and facing an
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extremely
annoying co-worker. Providing him with the opportunity of doing his job
oniline
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online
will not only save him
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hour each day, but
then
he will be able to make a lunch for his family and
moreover
, it will reduce his stress levels.
Hence
, being able to do your job from
home
is highly advantageous.
On the other hand
, the
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absence
essence
of
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face
to
face
contact among the
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colleagues
might weaken
realtionships
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relationships
.
This
is the situation especially within e-mailing
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since you neither see nor hear the other side.
As a
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people do not act the same when texting someone compared to talking, more precisely they are usually more courageous when typing.
This
might lead to
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increase in
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of conflicts and
misunderstendings
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misunderstandings
.
Therefore
, the lack of
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communication reflects in
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team atmosphere and
closness
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closeness
among co-workers. To sum up, despite all the possible problems caused by the absence of
face
to
face
communication, because of the strong advantages, I firmly believe that working from
home
is worth trying.
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