You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similer to each other . You don’t’ fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper . In your letter Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town centers is different from most other town centers Offer to give a guided tour of our town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam , I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the topic in a national newspaper which said that all

town

centres

were almost the same in my country .

However

, I do not agree completely with

this

view in my own opinion.

First

of all , I agreed all our

town

centres

are influenced by Chinese culture . There is no doubt that most of our customs are based on Chinese traditions .

In addition

, I

also

agreed the materials used by most

centres

are stones and wood .

However

, from the architectural point of view , I believe that my city

town

centre is different from others because it has its own unique style and decorations .

Moreover

, my city

town

centre is located near the river and which is quite strange because most

town

centres

are situated away from the river . Here, I would like you to visit my

town

if it is possible and I would help you with a guided tour whenever you come . I believe that my letter give you some clarification and I hope you would visit my city in near future . Best regards , Tom

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

204 words

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