‘The best way to educate children is by using the Internet in every lesson.’ To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?
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Firstly
, access to the internet
provides great opportunities for education policymakers to improve the quality of education for individual learners. It opens doorways to a wealth of information, knowledge and educational resources. For example, there are including lot
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Secondly
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