The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts provide

the

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information about the percentages of three-time meals, which contains

Sodium

, Saturated fat and Added

sugar

consumed by

people

in the USA,

this

may cause

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health problem. Generally speaking, breakfast was the healthiest meal

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in that

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that

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people

consumed fewer nutrients,

while

dinner was the unhealthiest meal of the day. For

the

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snacks

people

have to consume more

sugar

however

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they used less amount of

Sodium

and Saturated fat. First

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all, It is evident that when

people

have breakfast they consume less unhealthy nutrients with

sodium

14%, Saturated fat 16%, and

then

Added

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added

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sugar

16%, meanwhile

people

who use more unhealthy habits when they have dinner

that

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accounted

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Sodium

percentage

, Saturated fat 37

percentage

, and Added

sugar

percentage

Secondly

, when

people

have snacks

Sodium

and Saturated fat showed steady

with

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14% and 21% respectively,

however

, Added

sugar

was significantly high by 43%. The

second

unhealthiest meal was lunch in which

people

have

Sodium

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at 29

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percentage

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per cent

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, Saturated fat

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at 26

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% and Added

sugar

was lesser with 19

percentage

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per cent

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, people, percentage with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 6 times.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

172 words

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