Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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are making new roles and it causing few serious problems, some people believe that
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teachers are the main person who can make better roles.
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, others think that the main role of
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on patients hard. In my
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they both have vital Role but Patients have to
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active. I will elaborate
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with relevant examples. On the one hand, a teacher can provide students
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knowledge and make them active.
For example
, there is a
school
in
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where they admit those students who
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bad in
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and do not follow the roles. The teachers of
this
school
make them understand, the benefits of
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discipline
. The teachers make students good in practical knowledge to Practice frequently by the
discipline
.
Although
tracher
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teacher
has
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a vital
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role
on
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discipline
,
Parents
need to be more
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about
discipline
at home.
on the other hand
, Patients can ensure their
children
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day
children
stay home, so
parents
have
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responsiblity
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responsibility
to care properly
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their
child
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children
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. To illustrate, My nephew was addicted
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modern technology
such
as
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smartphone
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,
computer
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computers
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.
Befor
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Before
his final
exam
night in class
eight
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he played mobile
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games
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untill
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until
midnight and after
that
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he could not attend his
exam
on time.
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he fail the
exam
and he had to wait 1 year to attend the
exam
again, if his
Parents
were
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about him well it may
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not
happend
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happen
happened
. My
mephew
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nephew
was unhappy
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his life. In
this
modern civilization lot's of
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things
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children
can show interest but
Parents
have to
more
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concern
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about their
child
. To sum up, a teacher can force
children
to follow
discipline
during
the
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apply
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school
time, but after
school
parents
are responsible for
thier
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their
child
.
Parents
have to
more
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be more
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concern
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concerned
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about their
child
activities more
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than
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then
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a teacher
the teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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.
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