Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable.
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children
are the most valuable resource for Use synonyms
Use synonyms
future
. There are many people who think that there is the highest possibility to Correct article usage
the future
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raising
children
in the Use synonyms
future
, others argue that rural Use synonyms
area
is the best for Use synonyms
youngster
to be Add an article
the youngster
a youngster
successfull
in the Correct your spelling
successful
future
.
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children
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city
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this
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are equipped
children
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students
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successful
successfully
successfull
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the
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apply
study
. Use synonyms
As a result
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children
who Use synonyms
lives
in Change the verb form
live
the
urban Correct article usage
apply
area
are more Use synonyms
successfull
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successful
future
life. Use synonyms
In contrast
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also
some drawbacks to consider in Linking Words
Use synonyms
city
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the city
area
. Use synonyms
One
of the most significant Use synonyms
disadvantage
in Change to a plural noun
disadvantages
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city
is Add an article
the city
gaming
zone. At every corner of Correct article usage
the gaming
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the city
city
anyone can easily Add a comma
,city
finds
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find
gaming
place. There is a possibility to Correct article usage
a gaming
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the student
student
gets attracted by those gaming places. As a consequence, they can Fix the agreement mistake
students
losses
interest Replace the word
lose
to
their Change preposition
in
study
. To sum up, cities have Use synonyms
better
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the better
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some
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much
reason
why living in a village is far more convenient.Change to a plural noun
reasons
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rural
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a rural
area
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helpful
for Add a missing verb
is helpful
children
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,
and make them healthy. The result Remove the comma
apply
for
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of
this
is they can concentrate Linking Words
their
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on their
study
. Use synonyms
Secondly
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countryside
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the countryside
playground
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playgrounds
children
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playing
many kinds of sports, which helps them to refresh their Change the verb form
play
be playing
mind
. Fix the agreement mistake
minds
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, they can Linking Words
study
more and more. Use synonyms
However
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the village
a village
village
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of the most Use synonyms
disadvantage
is educational Change to a plural noun
disadvantages
institution
far from home. Due to Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
bad
road Correct article usage
the bad
system
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reach
their institution on time. Wrong verb form
reaching
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, poverty Linking Words
also
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cause
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causes
childress
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Childress
study
.
In conclusion, both Use synonyms
city
and village have enormous benefits Use synonyms
although
there are some negative aspects to consider, and for Linking Words
children
both of those suitable places to grow up.Use synonyms
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