It is clear that
children
are the most valuable resource for
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. There are many people who think that there is the highest possibility to
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children
in the
future
, others argue that rural
area
is the best for
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to be
in the
future
.
There are many reasons why
children
in the
city
areas succeed in their life
although
there
also
have some negative sites.
One
reason for
this
is most
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the education
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with modern equipment which helps
children
to enrich their cognitive skills as well as professional skills.
Besides
,
one
another reason for
this
is many schools are taught by foreign language
such
as English.
This
helps
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to
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in
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higher
study
.
As a result
,
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in
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urban
area
are more
in their
future
life.
In contrast
, there are
also
some drawbacks to consider in
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area
.
One
of the most significant
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in
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is
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zone. At every corner of
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anyone can easily
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gamingCorrect article usage
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place. There is a possibility to
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studentFix the agreement mistake
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gets attracted by those gaming places. As a consequence, they can
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interest
toChange preposition
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their
study
. To sum up, cities have
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possibility, there are
also
have
drawbacks though.
There are
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why living in a village is far more convenient.
Firstly
, in
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area
, it is so easy to get fresh food which
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for
children
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and make them healthy. The result
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this
is they can concentrate
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study
.
Secondly
, in
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, lots of
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so
children
can easily
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many kinds of sports, which helps them to refresh their
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.
As a result
, they can
study
more and more.
However
, in
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there are some disadvantages though.
One
of the most
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is educational
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far from home. Due to
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road
they faced difficulties to
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their institution on time.
Besides
, poverty
also
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to continue their
study
.
In conclusion, both
city
and village have enormous benefits
although
there are some negative aspects to consider, and for
children
both of those suitable places to grow up.