The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.
The given pie charts demonstrate expenditure changes in United Kingdom schools in 5 different categories namely, insurance,
teacher's
salaries, furniture and equipment, resources and other Fix the agreement mistake
teachers'
worker's
salaries over the Fix the agreement mistake
workers'
20_year
period.
From an Correct your spelling
20-year
overall
perspective,a huge amount of budget
accounted for teachers' wages during 20 years, Correct article usage
the budget
moreover
,the least sums
of money Fix the agreement mistake
sum
spent
Add a missing verb
was spent
for
insurance.
First of all,all three surveyed years illustrate that Change preposition
on
teacher
and other workers' payments had the biggest proportion between 1981 and 2001.Schools spent between 40% and 50% of Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
its
funds Correct pronoun usage
their
for
tutors.Change preposition
on
Besides
that,in 1981 28% of schools' prices utilized
Add a missing verb
were utilized
for
other employees and Change preposition
by
also
22% and 15% in 1991 and 2001 respectively.
On the other hand
, investment on
resources, furniture and equipment Change preposition
in
take
Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
the
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apply
third
place.It is interesting to note that between 5% and 23% for equipments
.Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
Finally
, the proportion of findings which is used for insurance had the least amount among all sections.It started at 2% and at the
end
it rose Add a comma
,end
up
to 8%.Change preposition
apply
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