The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line diagram illustrates the percentage of households having electrical appliances like washing
machines
, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners. The second
line diagram displays the number of domestic working hours
in a week. Both diagrams present the data between 1920 and 2019 for a particular country.
Overall
, both charts are inversely related to each other. From the beginning, year by year, the ownership of machines
kept increasing, and the duration of household works
kept decreasing. For the blessings of the appliances, people had to spend less time cleaning and doing other jobs in the house.
In 1920, only a few houses had refrigerators, 30 per Fix the agreement mistake
work
cent
had vacuum cleaners, and 40 per cent
of homes owned washing machines
. Only in 80 years, in 2000, 100 per cent
of houses had refrigerators and vacuum cleaners; However
, almost 70 per cent
of homes owned washing machines
.
Opposingly, from 1920, the weekly number of household working hours
kept dropping with the ownership of machinery. After 40 years, in 1980, this
domestic working hour dramatically
reduced to 15 Add a missing verb
was dramatically
hours
a week. In 2019, the working hour was just over 10 hours
a week.Submitted by zt.abir on
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