The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line diagram illustrates the percentage of households having electrical appliances like washing
machines
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, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners. The
second
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line diagram displays the number of domestic working
hours
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in a week. Both diagrams present the data between 1920 and 2019 for a particular country.
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, both charts are inversely related to each other. From the beginning, year by year, the ownership of
machines
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kept increasing, and the duration of household
works
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work
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kept decreasing. For the blessings of the appliances, people had to spend less time cleaning and doing other jobs in the house. In 1920, only a few houses had refrigerators, 30 per
cent
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had vacuum cleaners, and 40 per
cent
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of homes owned washing
machines
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. Only in 80 years, in 2000, 100 per
cent
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of houses had refrigerators and vacuum cleaners;
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, almost 70 per
cent
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of homes owned washing
machines
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. Opposingly, from 1920, the weekly number of household working
hours
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kept dropping with the ownership of machinery. After 40 years, in 1980,
this
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domestic working hour
dramatically
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reduced to 15
hours
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a week. In 2019, the working hour was just over 10
hours
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a week.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words machines, hours, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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