The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?

superpower countries holding nuclear weapons as a backup, maintaining peace in the world. Nuclear power is
one
of the cheapest and clean energies widely used nowadays and some people are of opinion that its benefits far outweigh the disadvantages ,I personally do not agree with the statement and going to elaborate in the essay in detail.
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,having nuclear weapons for me does not make the world safer as they can go into the wrong hands and make the opposite at any moment. Nuclear
energy
is
one
of the cheapest forms of
energy
but not the cleanest
one
as wind power and solar
energy
provides clean
energy
than
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. constructing and maintaining nuclear powerhouses are much costlier than making windmills and solar farms and these are reversible compared to nuclear
energy
. They do not produce any nuclear waste and radiation and neither poses any threats to surrounding residents, so much safer forms of
energy
than nuclear. Those radioactive substances stay active for years after their use and need to store them in safe and far away places. Nuclear powerhouses need special construction and need to keep checking for safety all the time as leaking can happen at any time. Storage and handling need special equipment and training,considering all the above-mentioned facts it's not safer and clear
energy
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conclusion I am against the statement that nuclear power provides safer and clean
energy
and the benefits ,far outweigh the disadvantages and nuclear weapons help to keep peace in the world.
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